Self-Effort---feedback appreciated!
Self-EffortA year ago at this time, I got off the planeanticipating your generous lovewiping away my tears, though,you didn't notice.Finally, you glanced my way...I was thin and wearing faded jeansin...
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There is such ache in this, that kind of want, that kind of infatuation makes one's chest feel collapsed in need, a great poem to evoke those sensation memories.OM~*~*~Eastern Wings at Galadrial's...
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Indeed, this is filled with ache. I don't think it needs any improvement. I felt the emotions ripping at my chest as I read.Poems For The Heart and Soul Please Drop by the Poetry Factory
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Expression of a need so great as to be almost inexpressibleand yet you succeeed in sharing your feelings
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Thanks all! I wrote this poem a couple of years ago and read it for the first time in a long time a week or so ago when people started commenting on it... I was pretty forlorn when writing this!
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